中式英语之鉴:激动的心情

93. 欧文按捺不住激动的心情，大声喊道：“我中奖了！”

[误] Owen couldn't hold back his exciting feeling, and he shouted, "I've got the winning number in the bond!"

[正] Owen couldn't hold back his excitement, and he shouted, "I've got the winning number in the bond!"

注：exciting feeling 这种搭配很不地道，虽然“振奋人心的消息”是 exciting news，“有趣的故事”是 interesting story，但“激动的心情”却要用名词形式 excitement 来表达。